Korea P/S
Korea's Problems
Japan needs to apologize to Korea because Japan did bad thing to Korea.
A long time ago, Japan was stronger than Korea. When the Joson's (Korea was called Joson long ago.)
last king 'Kojong' was alive, Japan killed Myung-sung-hwang-hu, and did not let Kojong go to his
father's grave.
The second one is Japan keeps saying Dokdo is their land but actually Dokdo is Korea's land because
Dokdo is closer to Korea than Japan.
Second, a long time ago, a person in Korea signed a page called
‘Dokdo is Korea land’ and Japan agreed. On that day, Japan also agreed we would not go to Dokdo
and catch fish but the Japanese kept catching fish. But they didn’t promise and catching fish. Japan also
didn’t catch fish, they also caught another animals. So some animals on Korea is not anymore in the
world. But we know why Japanese keep saying Dokdo is there land because if the have Dokdo, they have
almost the East Sea. Japan still didn't apologize yet but, it is Okay, maybe they could apologize, but it is
a long time ago persons so we can't say 'hey, apologize!' and Japan have a reason so we can't really say
like that.
A long time ago, Japan was stronger than Korea. When the Joson's (Korea was called Joson long ago.)
last king 'Kojong' was alive, Japan killed Myung-sung-hwang-hu, and did not let Kojong go to his
father's grave.
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Dokdo is closer to Korea than Japan.
‘Dokdo is Korea land’ and Japan agreed. On that day, Japan also agreed we would not go to Dokdo
and catch fish but the Japanese kept catching fish. But they didn’t promise and catching fish. Japan also
didn’t catch fish, they also caught another animals. So some animals on Korea is not anymore in the
world. But we know why Japanese keep saying Dokdo is there land because if the have Dokdo, they have
almost the East Sea. Japan still didn't apologize yet but, it is Okay, maybe they could apologize, but it is
a long time ago persons so we can't say 'hey, apologize!' and Japan have a reason so we can't really say
like that.
I think you did well on choosing the image because it already has captions, headings and information in general.
ReplyDeleteI like the way you conclude with ¨And more funny is japan didint apologize yet!¨ you brought some humor to your text.
You can do better on the paragraphing and also punctuation
good idea thank you
Deletei liked the way how you gave the evidence about a man wrote on the sign "Dokdo is Korea land and yeah, you did some humor on some sentences which is quite creative.
DeleteI think you did well on choosing on your image too. I think you should check your language usage and paragraphing.
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